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Heal

Why can't I heal you
take away your pain
why can't I heal you
make you fine again

hate seeing you this way
when you're hurting inside
want to take it all away
any help I will provide

Why can't I save you
from demons of the heart
Why can't I save you
from being torn apart

I know it feels so bad
Shouldn't fight it alone
I know it makes you sad
Shouldn't be on your own

I see the pain in your eye
And it shouln't be there
Don't like to see you cry
But you know that I care

I want to fix your soul
Repair all that you are
I want to make you whole
As you are my only star
Second of my recent productions just opened notepad and pressed the keys and this is the result.
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:iconbrici5:
Brici5 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awesome expressing of pure feelings
great poem!
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CalumDC Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Brici5 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome again! :)
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RTtheSmugleaf Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Student Filmographer
I swear, this should be turned into a song :I
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CalumDC Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It would be nice, but I know very little about the creation of music and making it more lyrical - and on top of that I'm horrific at singing. It's a great thought but difficult to implement
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RTtheSmugleaf Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Student Filmographer
I will find something to do with these verses one day, under your permission of course
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CalumDC Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
naturally, It would be an honour to see it transcend from something flat to something with tangible feeling. In the hands of someone more capable
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0-SEBASTIAN Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
Very deep and sincere.
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CalumDC Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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SirenRayn Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
great piece. it is touching. we want to help sometimes we other would not want us to involve themselves. I adore this and I feel for it.
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